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Cornell Club of Rochester Essay Contest

The Cornell Club of Rochester is pleased to announce its annual Essay Contest. The competition is open to all eleventh grade high school students in the greater Rochester area. We hope that participating in the contest will help develop your critical thinking and writing skills. In particular, our recent experience demonstrates these skills are critical to success in your college application essay next fall, as well as for your Regents English exam later this spring.

We will award a first prize of $100 in cash, and at least three second place prizes of $50 each; we will also designate an unlimited number of finalists, semi-finalists and honorable mentions, depending on the quality of submissions. In past years, up to 40% of the entrants have been so designated. In addition, if the first prize winner is accepted by and chooses to attend Cornell, the Club will increase the award to a total of $1000 during the winner's sophomore year. Similarly, if any second prize winner attends Cornell, that award will be increased to $500. The Cornell Club of Rochester offers the prize; winning or placing favorably in the essay contest in no way implies a favorable admission decision by any of Cornell’s seven undergraduate colleges. But we also know from the past years of the competition that every essayist designated as a semi-finalist or higher has been accepted to at least one “highly selective” college!

Background

One of the most important skills that you will continue to develop during the balance of your high school years and in college is the ability to thoughtfully evaluate opposing viewpoints – in other words, to think critically. This skill is important not only for students and scholars, but also for nearly every occupation you might choose, as well as for your personal mental growth and maturity.

The Rules

  1. Listed below are 10 sets of quotations drawn from the writings of a variety of famous scholars, authors, journalists, actors, critics, scientists, theologians, politicians, and business leaders. Select one of the two (or in some cases three) quotes from any one of the 10 sets. Here’s a hint to keep you on a successful track: Before you start to draft your essay, go over all the sets. Think about them. Try and come up with a word or phrase that captures the essence of each set of quotations. For example, set #5 is appropriate for an essay on multicultural diversity. Set #9 is all about the challenges of growing up.
  2. Pick one of the sets of quotations.  Then, write an essay of no more than 1000 words that supports one of the quotes in the set or demonstrates the relevance of the quote to life.
  3. There are no limits to the range of your responses, but they should imaginatively reflect your own experiences -- from reading, school, people you've met, extracurricular achievements (or failures), jobs, travel, family dinner discussions, etc.  Your essay should give the reader a sense of who you are and why you believe the quote is true.
  4. Then, on a separate page, use the opposing quotation and outline a half-dozen or so key points to rebut the case you have just made in your essay. This should take no more than a page.
  5. Finally, on the last page include:
    1. Your name
    2. Your parents’ or guardians’ names
    3. Your home address, telephone number, and e-mail address where we may contact you
    4. The name of your school
    5. The name of your English teacher with his/her school phone number
    6. The name of your guidance counselor and his/her school phone number

  6. All entries must be in Microsoft Word format or text format.

  7. Submit your essay by email attachment to the following email address:

    CornellEssayContest@gmail.com

  8. All entries must be e-marked no later than January 15, 2008.

Questions? Send an email to CornellEssayContest@gmail.com. We expect to announce this year's results no later than May 15, 2008.

Winners will be selected from among those entrants demonstrating the clearest writing and expository skills, imaginativeness of their position, and the integrity and logic of their supporting arguments -- and counter-arguments.

Quotation Sets

1. “The most beautiful thing we can experience is the mysterious. It is the source of all true art and science.” (Albert Einstein, What I Believe)  versus  “To understand God’s thoughts we must study statistics, for these are the measure of his purpose.” (Florence Nightingale) and “Consciousness is mysterious, and quantum theory is mysterious, and wouldn’t it be nice if one explained the other?” (Sir Francis Crick)

2. “It was books that taught me that the things that tormented me most were the very things that connected me with all the people who were alive, or who had ever been alive.” (James Baldwin)  versus  “Experience is the child of thought, and thought is the child of action. We cannot learn men from books.” (Benjamin Disraeli)

3. “Public policy these days is driven mostly by events, not books.” (Steven S. Hall, NY Times Book Review, November 14, 2004)  versus  “I don't care who writes a nation's laws ... if I can write its economics textbooks.” (MIT Institute Professor and Nobel Laureate Paul Samuelson)

4. “But war's a game which, were their subjects wise, kings would not play at.” (William Cowper, The Winter Morning Walk)  versus  “The tree of liberty must be refreshed from time to time with the blood of patriots and tyrants. It is its natural manure.” (Thomas Jefferson)

5. “There can be no fifty-fifty Americanism in this country. There is room for only one hundred percent Americanism, only for those who are Americans, and nothing else.” (Theodore Roosevelt) or “This country was settled and built by those seeking to be a part of it, and not apart from it.” (Robert Bartley editorial, The Wall Street Journal)  versus  “Let us celebrate the multicultural differences that made America great.” (Bill Clinton)

6. “What is past is prologue.” (Shakespeare, The Tempest)  versus  “We must disenthrall ourselves from the past. Otherwise it becomes a barrier to progress.” (Abraham Lincoln)

7. “Money is life to us wretched mortals.” (Hesiod, 8th century BC)  versus  “Money buys everything except love, freedom, immortality, silence and peace.” (Carl Sandburg, 1952)

8. “People have to believe in their capacity to act and bring about a good result. Leaders must help them keep that enlivening belief.” (John W. Gardner, The Tasks of Leadership)  versus  “The best leader is the one who has sense enough to pick good men to do what he wants done, and self restrain enough to keep from meddling with them while they do it.” (Theodore Roosevelt, 1907)

9. “The problem with the future is that it keeps turning into the present.” (Hobbes, Calvin and Hobbes) or “How beautiful is youth, that is always slipping away! Whoever wants to be happy, let him be so: about tomorrow there’s no knowing.” (Lorenzo de’Medici, Trionfo di Bacco et Arianna)

 versus 

“Grow old with me!
The best is yet to be!
The last of life for which the first was made:
Our times are in His hand, Who saith,
‘A whole I planned, Youth shows but half;
Trust God: see all, nor be afraid!’ ”
(Robert Browning, Rabbi ben Ezra)

10. “The middle of the road is all the usable surface. The extremes, left and right, are in the gutters” (Dwight D. Eisenhower)  versus  “People who stay in the middle of the road get run over.” (Aneurin Bevan) and “The hottest place in hell is for those who remain neutral in times of moral crises.” (Dante)

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2005 Essay Contest Winners

In the 2005 essay contest, the Cornell Club of Rochester received 498 entries from many area high schools.  As always, the competition was fierce, but many dedicated Cornell Club judges narrowed the list down to these winning entries.  The essays below are published with the permission of the students and their parents.

Click on each student's name to read his or her essay:

PLACE STUDENT HIGH SCHOOL
Winner Lauren Glattly Canandaigua Academy 
Second Place   Thomas Hadley   Greece Olympia
Second Place David Lippman Pittsford Mendon
Second Place Erin Mulvehill Webster Thomas
Second Place Robert Ramsay Canandaigua Academy

2004 Essay Contest Winners

In the 2004 essay contest, the Cornell Club of Rochester received 438 entries from students attending eighteen different high schools.  The essays are reproduced here with the permission of the students and their parents.

Click on each student's name to read his or her essay:

PLACE STUDENT HIGH SCHOOL
Winner Elise Piazza Pittsford Mendon
Second Place   Tina Wang Webster Schroeder
Second Place Yi Zhang Brighton
Third Place Kelly Dagan Pavilion Central
Third Place Joshua Willis Brighton